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topic sentence: The original
children write: So he is my father.
reviews: Mother concerned about
2.
sentences still subject: (Tree tree ah ah) I got you (plant)
children to write: (rice balls rice balls) I got you (eat)
Comment: so cute ~ ~
3. Topic: side ........... .. ............ ..
children write side : his clothes off one side, while wearing trousers.
reviews: he in the end to take off or wear ah ~ ~
4. Title: textbooks
children write: class have been very boring.
reviews: lessons to concentrate on
5. Title: popular
children to write: I like to eat bananas.
reviews: Be careful choking
6. Title: Once upon a
children write: Xiao Ming came through the front door.
7. Title: innocent
children wrote: really hot today.
reviews: You're innocent ~ ~
8. Title: very
children write: Today I test very much.
reviews: I will tell your parents say ~ ~
9. Topic: One
children to write: I am one of an injured left foot.
reviews: You are a centipede? ~ ~
10. Topic: ... to ....
a child to write: a baby will one hundred dollars.
reviews: The teacher smiles to not work ..
11. Head: You see
children to write: What you looking at! not seen ah!
12. still sentence
Example: You (singing) I (dance)
children to write: you (okay) I (excellent)
reviews: You write the English translation you??
13. still sentence
Example: others are Quarry I (), in fact, I ()
children write: people Doukua me (handsome), I actually (a mask).
reviews: What mask so easy to use???
14. Title: good ... good ..
children write: mother's legs,Why get married - Qzone log, so fine and good thick ...
reviews : That in the end is fine or coarse?
15. Title:
children write after another: from work, my father came back after another.
reviews: in the end you have several father ah?
16. Topic: first. . . Again. . .
Example: eat first,UGG AUSTRALLIA, then take a bath.
children write: Sir, good-bye!
17. Title: The ends of the earth
children to write: my sister went to run around ends of the earth.
reviews: your sister will really run ~ ~
18. Head:
children has been written: I drew a straight line.
reviews: .......... .......
19. Head: Now
children write: I'm riding on a horse.
reviews: immediately come to my!
20. Title: Pikairouzhan
children write: power outage the night was dark everywhere,UGGクラシックキャディ, I'm scared Pikairouzhan,UGG Classic Mini!
reviews: see sentence ... teachers admire you. .
21. Title: thriving - the growth of a better metaphor like.
children write: my brother looks prosperous.
reviews: kids,UGG Classic Cardy, your brother is a vegetable you ...
there is a more blind ...
children write: thriving Wing confession.
reviews: Do not read too much drama ~ ~
22. Topic: Thank you .... because ......
children to write: I want to thank my mother,第八天 - Qzone日记.html, because she wrote me every day Operating ......
reviews: the original work is the mother of your written !!!!!!!
23. Title: sad
children write: ditch section in front of my house very sad .
reviews: the teacher is more upset ......
24. Topic: If
children write: soda than fruit juice nutrition.
children write: If not drink fruit juice does not taste good.
reviews: Orz .....
25. Title: altogether
children write: crunchy tasty biscuits!
reviews: (silent )........ .. =.=
26. Title: Genius
children to write: I have 3 days a bath.
reviews: only clean, washed every day ~ ~
27. Head: A ... ...
children would write: I walked out the door, opposite the convenience store.
there is a more blind ...
children to write: my brother a meal, on the stool.
reviews: sentences do not make make ...
28. Head: edge ... edge ...
children to write: my left was my right side too.
29. Head: very
children to write: I do not know very much what it means.
reviews: do not know to ask ....
30. Head: Because the children ... so ...
wrote: Because Mom and Dad,Cancer Male - Qzone log, so I was born in this world.
reviews: 5 points ....
31. Head: and ..... and .....
children: my mother was short and thin,UGG Classic Short, high-fat.
reviews: your mom ...... that monster?